Monday, November 2, 2015

Peer Reflections

Opinion Piece #1

1. Sam M.
2. Her story is about justified use of the military and not limiting it the abilities of the military.
3. "I believe it should be a circumstantial decision left up to our President and U.S. government leaders." 

4. She does address why the rest of the world would look towards the U.S. military for support. 
5. She was not wishy washy with her opinion, and made her opinions clear. 
6. She used one quote from President Obama. 
7. She wrote in first person. 
http://samsbowieblogs.blogspot.com/2015/10/opinions-writing-preview.html?showComment=1446492405971#c6787671312197917997

Opinion Piece #2 
1. Claire 
2. Her story is about why she feels all students should be able to leave campus during lunch. 
3. "I believe that all grades (freshman-seniors) should be able to go off campus during lunch when appropriate."
4. She did address why some people might feel only seniors should leave campus at lunch. 
5. She was some what wishy washy with her opinion when she said that all students should be able to leave campus during lunch, and then changed it to only a few times a week they should. 
6. She did not use quotes. 
7. She wrote in first person. 
http://clairesjournalismblog.blogspot.com/2015/10/1st-commentary-article.html?showComment=1446493248866#c2013200794948379904



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